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Vacation Mode; or, Writing the Second Novel Draft

I have to excuse myself from the daily blog writing. Although it isn't much of a burden, I still need to focus on the current task, which is to write the second draft of my NaNoWriMo novels.

Slowly but Steadily, Steadily but Surely.

The reason for this is that I want to see the second version on a printed book, because I can get a free hardcover copy from Lulu.com(NaNoWriMo winner's goodies) before the February deadline!

I will be back! PEACE

Bee; or, Blue Was the Warmest Color

Excerpt From the Novel I Am Writing (DRAFT)
As the driver dropped her off on the entrance, a woman in a blue working coat, stitched with the words Royale Flight Engineer, approached her. Under the title, printed the name Beecay Ubmos.
She was smiling at Amanda, a bit affectionately, and extended her hand. “Hi, you must be the new commander. I am Beecay Ubmos, the flight engineer, but everyone here just call me Bee.”
"Hi, Bee, I am Amanda Ashford, but you call me Ada if you like," Amanda returned with a smile and held out her hand. Bee’s grip was firm but tender, her eyes were beaming passion, and her smile was full of fondness. Their hands mingled with each other for a very long time, and so did their eyes. Blue, crystal blue, blue like the coat Bee was wearing, blue like the eyes Bee was seeing. At that instant, blue was the warmest color. 
Slowly, Bee’s thumb was rubbing, or more like touching, caressing the back of Amanda’s hand in a circular motion. And Amanda enjoyed it, she was giggling, and so was Bee.

Queen Bee

"How can I be of help, my highness?"

"Lick it."


"Do you mean licking it, m'lady?"


"Do it."


"I am sorry, your majesty, I am afraid I cannot do it."


"Suck it."


"No, pardon me, your grace. As I have said, I will not do such a thing."


"Get it."


"I am only your faithful servant. I pledged my service to you, but not for this unspeakable business."


"Call it."


"That I shall do gladly. my Queen Bee."

The Sneeze of Benjamin

Quite a powerful character, Benjamin maintained his workout intensity to a point, where he would be in the deep of muscles and flesh.

Such a hulky man, stood among the crowd, was quite scary for the least part of the story. But when he sneeze, he SNEEZE.

A loud, thundering noise would come out his monstrous nostrils and it would be the annihilation of the people that stood next to him.

Field of the town

The field connecting the two towns together was in an Autumn rush. Scarcely, could one see the oily green hidden in between the golden yellow, not to mention the fiery red fruits that hung low in the bush.

The country road that ran all the way straight, mountain after mountain, was waiting eagerly for its usual customers--travelers that went all the way from the west to the east, through the almost forgotten passage.

Carriages with two horses trod the path unhurriedly; while cabins with four horses, or sometimes up to eight with firm muscles, ran along with haste.

Dust was dancing in the dry air, under each step of a horse.

The riders, mostly dressed in their casual shorts, would envy the vast field at first sight, but as the journey continued, they would soon lose interest in the wild untamed nature, and return to their never ceasing chatters.

Torn-up Town



[The town (sigh). Lorde IS something else. And yeah, I crave a different kind of buzz, as well.]

Lidia heaved the bag on her shoulders and walked the steep slope uphill. The bag felt like dead-weight to her, even though it contained nothing but a bottle of half-filled water and a sweatshirt. She wore a grey jumpsuit, though the weather was quite warm. Tiny beads of crystal formed on her forehead, and shone brightly under the gleaming fireball, which was hiding partially behind a great cotton.

The town generated only a soft buzz, a constant low humming. It was ignored by Lidia. And it was almost unmoving, as if time had stopped there, unwillingly.

Turned to Look back at the way she came, Lidia saw the tarmac road she walked on ran long, dark in color, sturdy in shape. It went soldier straight, on and on, packed in between houses of the same fashion.

She had to walk since the bus seldom came at desired time. And she dreaded waiting alone at the bus stop, because she would start to think of many different things that bother her. 

There she walked, eyes fixed on the endless path. There she listened, ears focused on the surroundings, but heard nothing except the soft buzz.

The suburban town was practically dead, almost everyone was working in the city. The elderly and infants were at a sleep; teenagers like her, were either curled up in their rooms playing video games, or looking at nothing in particular while also thinking about nothing.

It was a bored old town, not a bit cheerful or lively. Everyday would be another iteration of the same routine, running over and over by the same group of people. What better thing should she do today, Lidia thought of that question every single morning.

There, Lidia halted.

The roar of the bus engine.

She ran, despite the sore in her legs, and the burden on her shoulder.

Finally, she could leave the town, even just for a little while. Free from the ever constant.

Truck

Norman was chilling in his truck, legs crossed above the driving wheel, when the beeping started. He sat back on the driver seat and found the device in the dark. The sound was coming under his seat, as he bent down and reached for it, patting the floor, searching for something solid. And when he finally grabbed it, it had been beeping loudly and faster like it was a explosive device.

The message flashing on the display and the sound went away, as Norman put a cease to it by pressing the reply button. His hand then reached out of the window and knocked hard against metal plated door for sometime, yelling "It's time, let's go, go, go."

From the back of the truck, three armed man jumped out of the container and banged its door shut. They approached Norman and hopped on and squeezed into the two-person passenger seat, since they were all lean, though muscular. They rested their weapon in between their legs.

"Ready?" Norman said.
They gave a nod and Norman made a few heavy twist on the wheel before the ignition. And out they went, from the middle of nowhere, heading toward the highway.

*

The Halcyon County Sheriff Department received order from the Gayion City Police Department regarding their recent intercepted transmission. Sheriff Bob Miller was at the desk, ready to head home when the phone ring. "Hello?"

"Hey, Sheriff Bob, I'm glad I've caught you before you went home," said a young man's voice.

"Well, what can I do for you, son?" Bob recognized the voice.

"There's a truck heading our way with a load of illegal goods. Now I don't you want to spook them in anyway, so just drive your old pick up and tail them before they entered Gayion. I've send some info to you, and call us if you need anything."

"I don't think I should be involved in the operation, Detective Ryan, it's way beyond my jurisdiction here, didn't that spokesperson said?"

"Uncle Bob, just tail them and feed me in personally, it won't go into the record."

Bob sighed. "Alright, but just so you know, I'll deny my involvement if anything should happen."

"Absolutely."

*

Norman signaled a left turn and waited before the double white, and accelerated suddenly so as to join in the line before another speeding Joe took his line. Steadily, he gave gas and raised the speed to over 50 miles.

They sat in the bumpy truck, their head bobbed up and down with its movement. Norman looked at the mirror and detected nothing.

An old pick up joined behind, swayed between the lines and sometimes aligned with the truck, but always failed to overtake Norman as he pumped more juice to the engine.

Norman looked at the mirror again, though the headlight of the pick up was almost blinding, he could still make out the shape of the driver inside.

Spaceport

Kefny oversaw the operation of the spaceport of Sodeo City, one of the major hub for the public galactical transportation.

Everyday, thousand upon thousand of spacecrafts flew in and out of the port smoothly with the assistance provided by the station’s system and the personels running the field. He himself would sat or pace around the control center and monitor the crew and staff at work, and maybe compose the daily report or talk to some pilots and captains that travelled far and long, as to lighten their weight and maybe crank up their smile.

Kefny was always on the verge of coming up with something very funny, and at times, he would make people laugh, but other times, not quite. His jokes were improvised, mostly based on the situation, and add-in with his personal experience.

Pilot Mordior called upon his service today.

“Kefny, my lad, how’re you today.”
“Good, good, how’re you?”
“Quite bored, in fact.”
“Why, the day’s just started.”
“Ah, you don’t know. My stomach have been playing naughty since last night.”
“Well, isn’t that unfortunate, mate. How’s Geodiny?”
“Hi,” said Geodiny as he poked his face into view, “Mordior had the best fart sound ever, I could vouched for that. The smell though, nah.”
“Sounded something like this?” Kefny pressed him fat lips against his meaty arms and blew heavily against the skin. The sound was tremendously loud.
“I wasn’t sure there could be a even more pleasant farting noise than Mordior’s,” said Geodiny.
“Ah, you lousy lad,” said Mordior, “We are getting off now, talk to you went we get back.”

And away they flew.

They were a lot of call going up to Kefny’s office, but none were of very much importance, except the one that ringed everyday at exactly 12 noon.

“This is Kefny, everything’s in order, ma’am.”
“...”
“Yes ma’am.”
“...”
“No problem, I will send the message as soon as it landed.”
“...”
“Sure, sure.”
“...”
“Okay, have a good day, ma’am.”

Wish

Sam held the book in her hand, and was lying on the sandy ground with lifeless grass. She leaned against the thin tree trunk no higher than a person and had the support of her body relied on it. Her ears were filled with music, for she had the earpiece attached to her phone, hidden in her furry pink hoodie. She stretched her legs and rested them with one crossed over another. For a long time, she stayed in that same posture, unmoving, reading her book.

The clear sky and the winter mid-afternoon sun caressed her hands, which was touching the book. It was light, a paperback around 300 pages, that gave her a feast on such a leisure day.

As she sat there, the world didn’t stop for her, but continue to spin with life and noise and dogs and kites and people and children and bikes and skateboards and the sea. It didn’t matter though since the book was all she read. No matter how many joy and fun the crowd were having at the park, she never raised her head once, not to stole a glimpse at the barking dogs, flying kites, or the crying kids.

Sam slowly crunched through the book, from the warm, bright afternoon light to the cool, dim dusk ray. Finally she closed the book, her fingers stayed on the book and her eyes looked out to the sea, where ships set sail. She closed her eyes for a moment, and saw the purple radiance of the glamorous, setting sun through her eyelids.

The book, she put down on the ground. And with effort, she stood up and made a few kicks on the ground, so as to wake up her legs from the break and return them to duty. Sam had her clothes smoothen first, and then bent low to get her book. Her shoulder length hair streamed down her neck and flowed down as she reached the book. With a little twist of head from low to high, right to left, she recalled her hair to her back and they stayed there without disobeying their master.

With that, Sam squinted at the fading ray, and set out with the book in her hand.

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